First offering from the Story “Lemonade Stand”

Posted on by WriterYMNelson

As promised in a previous post, a little flash fiction from yours truly.

It’s a little political, but I wanted to move a little out of my comfort zone to show a little versatility.  What do you think? Let me know in the comments below.

2 thoughts on “First offering from the Story “Lemonade Stand””

  1. This is an interesting twist on the story but I think some of the characters and motivations need to be clarified more. The story needs a better ending but there was some great detail!!You truly have a gift for writing.

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    1. Thanks for the feedback! I’m so used to writing character-driven stories. This is my first truly flash fiction (shorter than a short story) piece: flash fiction being more about the plot than the character. I had to cut it off before I started making the narrator too round.

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